Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
About Digital Art / Artist MarkoMale/Croatia Recent Activity
Deviant for 1 Year
Needs Core Membership
Statistics 15 Deviations 175 Comments 779 Pageviews
×

Critiques


I love the colors and the yellow-bluish/green gradient that absorbs the viewer into this gentle world. Characters and the colors are bo...


I like the scenery, it's obviously well drawn, shadows, colors as well, but I would add a few things: 1)I would add some creatures in w...

Newest Deviations

Wild wild little west 3 (sunset) by 13yearstheInquisitor Wild wild little west 3 (sunset) :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 0 0 Wild wild little west 2 by 13yearstheInquisitor Wild wild little west 2 :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 0 0 F-male form by 13yearstheInquisitor
Mature content
F-male form :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 1 0
Seduction by 13yearstheInquisitor Seduction :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 0 0 Night by 13yearstheInquisitor Night :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 2 0 FIVEsquares by 13yearstheInquisitor FIVEsquares :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 1 0 She in summer by 13yearstheInquisitor She in summer :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 0 0 Plan view, two balls by 13yearstheInquisitor Plan view, two balls :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 0 0 Villain by 13yearstheInquisitor Villain :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 0 0 Bird by 13yearstheInquisitor Bird :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 0 0 Death of the master by 13yearstheInquisitor Death of the master :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 0 0 Fall by 13yearstheInquisitor Fall :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 0 0 Vacation by 13yearstheInquisitor Vacation :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 1 0 Bait by 13yearstheInquisitor Bait :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 1 0 Francis and the crow by 13yearstheInquisitor Francis and the crow :icon13yearstheinquisitor:13yearstheInquisitor 0 0

Favourites

Prism by FrankHeilerArt Prism :iconfrankheilerart:FrankHeilerArt 154 29 Serenity by Aenami Serenity :iconaenami:Aenami 1,121 24 Tribal #1 by artursadlos Tribal #1 :iconartursadlos:artursadlos 90 1 Sunset At Leigh On Sea by fineartbyandrewdavid Sunset At Leigh On Sea :iconfineartbyandrewdavid:fineartbyandrewdavid 54 21 Water Light City by wlop Water Light City :iconwlop:wlop 4,392 53 scribble design 01 [SOLD] by caosgii scribble design 01 [SOLD] :iconcaosgii:caosgii 61 18 Macabre Queen by Sephiroth-Art Macabre Queen :iconsephiroth-art:Sephiroth-Art 208 11 Let's be a Wildflower by RaphaelleM Let's be a Wildflower :iconraphaellem:RaphaelleM 734 56 2007.2016 by betteo 2007.2016 :iconbetteo:betteo 266 29 cinco by betteo cinco :iconbetteo:betteo 133 6 the.long.sorrow by betteo the.long.sorrow :iconbetteo:betteo 259 6 boonies by michalsawtyruk boonies :iconmichalsawtyruk:michalsawtyruk 487 34
Literature
au revoir
when you left me
you left
bits of yourself behind, too:
at least the things
that lived on in my mind
and at least the way
that we said goodbye.
every kiss is an
airtight exchange,
holy covenant,
breathless promise.
at least the way
that we kissed, that time.
:icontoxic-nebulae:toxic-nebulae
:icontoxic-nebulae:toxic-nebulae 11 0
Mature content
treatise on sex as self-harm :icontoxic-nebulae:toxic-nebulae 93 48
Environment-Brushes by TheEchoDragon Environment-Brushes :icontheechodragon:TheEchoDragon 8,564 162 .:: Sketchdump Little people 11 ::. by Maiwenn .:: Sketchdump Little people 11 ::. :iconmaiwenn:Maiwenn 50 9

Watchers

No watchers yet.

Groups

Activity


I love the colors and the yellow-bluish/green gradient that absorbs the viewer into this gentle world. Characters and the colors are both resonating in the same peaceful vibe. Even though there is a beast in the picture, its expression is so calm and nonthreatening, it goes perfectly with the rest.
I see that you chose to draw this in a drawing manner, where instead a precise one line "made with ruler", a view can see the lines as drawn with pencil, multiple times for one line. And this is where I would make the only change in this picture, I would use this style for stares, tower and the boy, but as the view goes up, the beast would be drawn more precisely, more realistically, without this cute drawing-style clumsiness, with more details.
This is it. I like it a lot, and I made one remark that in my imagination would made it half grade up. Good luck.
I like the scenery, it's obviously well drawn, shadows, colors as well, but I would add a few things: 1)I would add some creatures in woods, probably only their eyes, and maybe a creature-wolf in bottom right corner. I would go for scary ambient more than lonely and mysterious,
2) this is not a major thing but i would rotate right character also towards Temple as all three are so drawn towards it

That mist going from the Temple is a good detail, i like that, I like that stares are old and uneven,
Temple looks like it could use a little dept, maybe this is part of my "being scary" idea. It would be scarier if it was bigger:)

Journal

No journal entries yet.

deviantID

13yearstheInquisitor
Marko
Artist | Digital Art
Croatia
Interests

Comments


Add a Comment:
 
:iconmaiwenn:
Maiwenn Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks a lot for the watch ! :hug:
Reply
:icon13yearstheinquisitor:
13yearstheInquisitor Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2016   Digital Artist
No problem
Reply